[SI] Shoot-In, Timing Comments
Here in Newfoundland, the grass needs mowed and the SI submissions
need critiqued. Hummm, which will I do first.... OK, that was
easy. [Mardon starts typing.]
I like this mandate but I think that Jim gave several of us an easy
out by blatantly allowing archived submissions when he posted the
mandate. For slothful people like me (and apparently Bret, Walter,
and Alan) that little bit of extra 'wiggle room' was all it took to
allow me to rely on an archived shot rather than getting out there
with my camera and finding something new to fit the mandate. Shame
on us 'archivers'. On the other hand, we still did better than
99.99999999% of the photographers in the world; at least we
submitted something! :)
On to the reviews. (I'm sure glad that I don't have to be graceful
with my comments until next time.)
Mardon
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69154440
The "timing: theme for this image is not what you think. It was
good timing because I just happened to be driving down this road,
with my camera laying on the seat beside me, when I came upon these
Ski-dooers jumping the road. What luck! What good timing! I
stopped and started taking some photos. They stopped jumping.
They sent an emissary over to me to ask if I was taking photos for
the police. When I laughed and said "No", they went back to their
jumping and started actually 'showing off' for the camera.
Bowser
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69122585
Good stop-action shot. I wonder what this would have looked like
at f/2.8 (or as wide open as your lens would allow)? I think I'd
prefer to have the trees blurred more, even if it was at the
expense of also blurring the players to the rear of the shot. The 2
players in front are the centre of the action, so I'd prefer them
to also be the clear centre of focus (both literally and
figuratively.) Good colours. I wonder if a very tiny reduction in
contrast might also be a small improvement.
Duncan Chesley
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/timing
"Handheld through a screen door" says it all. Even for a VR lens,
isn't 1/60 sec at 160mm too slow to handhold? The screen door
provided a unique 'effects filter' adding to the soft fuzziness of
the image and dramatically reducing contrast. What can I say,
I'll give you 5 bonus points for having the guts to experiment with
a shot this unique. Other than that, I deduct 10 points for
everything else. I can tell you with confidence that Nikon will
never use this shot to hawk the quality of their Nikkor 70-200 VR
lens. See, I told you I don't have to be graceful with my comments
until next time! ;)
Ken Nadvornick
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69122635
Boy! For B&W it's sure hard to beat film. Great shot! Smack on
with the mandate. If this wasn't posed, what did that guy say when
your flash went off? Wow! I like what appears to be frost on the
bus shelter. The only thing I don't like about this photo is the
reflection of the flash. To my eye, the reflection is distracting
and does not add to this image as it sometimes can. I'm going to
have to try more B&W. I really like this image.
Quercus
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69122644
Certainly meets the mandate! It's too bad those buildings are so
distracting in the background. I notice that you were at 1/60 sec
which shows motion in the water nicely, and at ISO100. I guess to
blur the background with a wider aperture, while keeping the other
settings, you would have needed a neutral density filter. I think
a circular polarizer would have helped a lot for this image. It
would have taken some of the glare off the water and also allowed
you to go one stop wider with the aperture.
Jim Kramer
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69122670
I'm trying to tie this image in with the mandate. I guess it's the
fleeting expression on the child's face. Is that correct? Being
the generous guy that I am (LOL), I'll not deduct any points for
being off-mandate but it's close. I think I'd like the camera to
have been a little closer to the floor for a better perspective.
Was there a ceiling that would have allowed for a bounce flash? I
find it really hard to get good lighting with a flash that's
mounted on the camera. The shadow behind the train's smokestack is
a big tell-tale about the flash used for this image. All that
said, how can any image of a smiling child not be appealing;
especially if it's our own child or grandchild! :)
Bret Douglas
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69124569
This image has a fantastic connection to the mandate. The timing
of the 1/800 sec shutter speed was critical as was the timing of
when the shutter was released. I wish the shutter had been
depressed just a micro-instant before it was. IMO, if the ball had
been caught completely still and in sharp focus, with the blurred
club shown just infinitesimally before impact, this good shot would
have been a great shot. As they say, "Timing is everything."
Helen Silverburg
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69132314
Very nice image. I love the colours and silhouette. Welcome to the
SI. This image certainly meets the mandate. You've captured the
sun at exactly the moment of sunset. The only thing that could
make the timing of a sunset photo better is if you could somehow
capture that elusive Inferior-Mirage Green Flash that people talk
about. Now that would be fantastic timing!
Graham Fountain
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69150767
The mandate didn't really say "good timing", so perhaps your
example of "poor timing" does qualify. I'll give you the benefit
of the doubt. No deduction on that account. It's kind of unique
to see the still feet and only a very hard to detect blurred bird.
IMO, your image is pretty much like Duncan's; that is, bonus points
for guts and outside-the-box thinking, but a major points deduction
for questionable picture quality.
Walter Banks
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69153824
I like being in these kinds of places so that probably makes me
biased in favour of your image. I love the water service
contrasted with the wake of the boat. I don't like the tilted
shoreline. When I take a shot like this, I'm never sure if I
should compose for a horizontal shoreline or a plumb camera. I
almost always do the former and I think that should be the case
with this image too. The tilted shoreline is the first thing I see
and that detracts from the image.
Alan Browne
http://www.pbase.com/shootin/image/69159190
Glad you submitted this one. I'm supposed to photograph a
volleyball tournament on Saturday. Unfortunately, I don't think
I'm going to be allowed to use any flash, let alone 2 of them. :(
1/15 sec? Was that handheld? The slow shutter allows the of the
ball to stand out but it also blurs most everything else in the
photo. There's no question that I really like the hands that are
above the net and the ball. Those elements of the image are great!
The rest of the image is not quite so appealing to me. The shadows
on the back wall from two flashes are kind of distracting and the
overall softness is not my cup of tea. Then again, I'm a sharpness
'nut' as many times confessed.
Now, I wonder how much longer that grass grew while I was typing t
Mardon
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